rotating your phone will give better results
 notes: chapter structure:a-stone-walled-kink might make a good starting point. 

PART 1:
reset-2 //written
{
  Narrator:"Martha"
    Martha wakes up
      she has no recent memory
      in a rich stranger's house
    Martha talks with Rossin
      discusses namshubs, hooks, and related
      philosophy of what an idea is
      don't look left
        a monster is there
        it ate Rossin's author
        Rossin subdued it
          but at a high cost
          Martha is a bit hollow
    Martha pushes Rossin and exits the house
     She concerns herself with her work  
    Rossin gets hit by a car
      he is fine, asks what is real
    Martha can't do certain weird things:
      proprioception is messed with her ear and hands    
}

the-start-of-bad-things //written
where-things-go-wrong //written
a-stone-walled-kink //written
enter-the-den //written
lions-tigers-and-bears //written
tests //written
inside-the-unknown //written
vows //written
lixin-merph //written
errors //written
redeye //written
the-undernet //written
restructuring //written
interludes //written

PART 2:
the-plan //written
descent-resent-torment //written
confrontation //written
seeds of a new world //written
the great awakening //written
consequences //writing
  {

  Narrator:"Martha Crisp"
    Rossin and Martha have a conversation:
      Martha thinks Rossin knew that much algera would kill her,
      Hedges her bets against Alacira if she is mistaken or lying: she keeps her suspicions close to herself,
    Wilbert worries that he only can go out on Halloween now 
    Wilbert is not awake... just a fish-man,




  Narrator:"Robert Glass of the Tok"
    A surviving Robert Glass of the Tok in the lab of Alice Glass 
    directing the manufacture of her serum among themselves, laments their inability to find a needle in a haystack.
    Goals: scene is to hammer home what Al-Tok is, its limitations, and a better picture of its immediate goals.
    
    
  Narrator:"Flanagan"
    Flanagan abandons his body, which dies when they enter the real world.
    Flanagan takes over Felix 
    Felix is kept in the 'back-seat' of own his mind.

    Flanagan rifles though his brain
    links to chapters and events with Kent: [
      from: the meeting of the undernet,
      to: walking The Chemist on the hospital bed,
      ]
    pragmatic reasons to keep the charade going - (he finds them).
    
    {TO USE}
    Everyone was in their own world, and trying to force everyone else to join them.
    But by pulling equally in all directions: commonalities appeared, ripples and echos of coherence.
    harmonizing waves in a sea of minds bound the desires of the outliers, often in persecution.



  }


{
  Narrator:"Kent"
    Flanagan in Felix returns with Kent to his home
    
  Narrator:"The Relux"
    The Relux plot-line lines... //heist stuff



}
 
{
  Narrator:"Al-tok"
    Al-tok discovering the needle in its haystack - a link to every human heart.
    Al-tok now has a direct line to every human heart,
    It wants to talk to the person who put the needle there: Martha
  
  Narrator:"The Relux"
    The Relux plot-line lines... //heist stuff

}

{
  Narrator:"The Relux"
    The Relux plot-line lines... //heist stuff

    Jochek talks Martha what it is to be part of a hivemind.

  Narrator:"Martha"
    Robert Glass of the Tok starts giving people heart attacks just to distress Martha
    Al-tok's access to any human heart means it can take over for a short time.
      this is a death sentence

  Narrator:"Kent"

    Alacira and Flanagan nuke the lab - destroying the physical presence of Al-Tok.
    When Kent proves resistant to their manipulations, violence ensues?
    
    Robert in the body of ${}enters and informs them why they messed up in the second interludes

}
interludes 2 //writing
{

}


PART 3

26
{
  Narrator:"Robert Glass"
  Time: shortly after summoning Al-tok  
    Robert Glass, and Alice Glass (Who shares his mind) have a road trip
     They are hiding in the physical world
    They have a conversation:
      Al-tok is just controlling puppets, 
      It is not actually in any of them.
      And it can remove himself quickly.
      It needs a physical presence: 
        in order to inject it.
        'equivalent to showing a vein' 
}

27{
  Narrator:"The Relux"
    Al-tok attacks the Relux
      but being a hivemind - they stave it off.
  
  Narrator:"Martha"
    Martha suggests a giant hivemind 
      for all humanity.
    Al-tok attacks Martha -
      Rossin sacrifices himself
        to prevent Al-tok from re-planting a seed.
}
29 interludes 3?{
    //not sure what to put here
}
part 4:

30{
  Narrator:"Martha"
    Martha has nightmares, 
      Is nearly taken over by Al-tok 
      instead joins The Relux

  Narrator:"Robert"
    Alice in Robert suggests taking the serum
      inviting Al-tok into the physical world.
        Expose a vein
    Alice convinces Robert: 
      the creature 
        with billions of eyes and mouths
        feeding on humanity
          is not a good thing.
    Robert wants to use Al-tok 
      as a chip to renegotiation.

}
31{
  Narrator:"Martha"
    They bring Al-tok back 
      Through Robert/Alice 
      They attempt to reach a bargain
        The are forced to sterilize 
          Fail to sterilize
          No serum left.

    Martha convinces Felix to join The Relux
}
part 5: epilogue

32{
  Narrator:"Various"
    montage of various small scenes
      In the form of links:
        stories of 
          falling into Al-tok 
          The Relux getting larger.

  Narrator:"Martha"
    Martha talks with Alacira:
      Alacira talks about setting up shop
        on an adjacent angle, 
        in a different link
        hunting for Al-tok
    Martha gives Alacira a book
      Alacira destroys: disappearing.
        Felix overheads (as a Relux): 
          He tries to keep it a secret 
          fails
          breaks from The Relux
    
    Felix is sure Al-Tok is dealt with.
    something goes here to get martha away
}
33{

  Narrator:"Martha"
    Martha arrives at Flanagan's, 
      Felix is gone 
      Flanagan is bleeding out on the floor 
        when he dies - he uses the landing pad on Martha
        Flanagan explains about the reality walkers
        to his surprise - he has no admin rights in her head, 
          a consequence of Rossin being in there first

    Martha burns a stack of papers 
      that may or may not be a catchall cure for cancer 
        written in exactly one place.
      She herself disappears
        with a little guidance from Flanagan
}





 big notes:: 
  
  plot line threads to keep track of: 
    the way out needs to be added.
  
  A lot of this is old - and needs to be revamped.


 Notes on appending to this document:
 Format should be:
 2-spaces for indentation

 describes both a new scene, and the narrator for that scene
  
  Narrator: {{name}}     
    plot point
      consequences/explanations
        consequences of consequence... etc
      sub-plot point
        sub-consequences/explanations
          sub-sub-plot point
            etc